I didn't want to jump on the hate train with this one - I think the premise of the story is actually kinda fun (even if it is Twilight fan fiction). But the prose here is just truly appalling. The characterization is terrible - I don't believe either of these people are real people. Ana's internal monologue is just so difficult to get through - she is just so clueless and naive. I honestly don't know why I made myself finish this one.